My poem is about the rights and honor of being a knight like defending the people who can't defend themselves. While i pretty much only used drawings for the visuals it was sorta (“Sorta”) rushed, mainly procrastination and some of it being, laziness… But I digress, this is about my visual poem. Not my laziness of making it, is it?
While my visual poem is barren of special effects I feel that the uniqueness and great writing makes up for the lack of effects. I used special colored text to try and give a, Magically burnt into feel so to speak. Also I used drawings to make up the B-roll, Because where am i going to find a knight wearing armor in hawaii! (Just ask sir Surfsalot). Even though how lackluster the effects were I am more then happy how it came out. I feel the the writing was write-on (Badam tis!) and if I had more time and actualy wanted to work on it at home I feel like this could have turned out fantastic. The ways I would improve it would be adding effects, Maybe I could get some natural b-roll, And probably add some transition effects. Other then that I feel like this is one of my best poems, (I have a haiku which is my best but thats a story for another post). Micah out and about
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Well shucks so this is our team's (Team 5 best team) "finished" news story by finished I mean rushed but enough about that this news story is about the new(-ish) Sports Authority (Woo! Break out the wine! Who cares.) This is good for Kauai because we don't have those shops that sell sports wear so this is a pretty needed improvement. This news story pretty much just advertises the new Sports Authority. The fabulous-tastic people who made this are known by Linden Johns, Kamalei Berg,and Kalani Young And dont forget... meeee... *gasp* eeeeeeee... Yeah so this is the finished news story not the best but I feel its not the... No wait it is. I think that our news story is pretty good just not A+ grade. Its not worthy of an A+ because we didn't have enough b-roll and most of the shots we had had faults (Blurry, shaky, etc). The experience however was amazing and awesomely epic like interviewing a member of Sports Authority was really really cool. Overall, I sorta like it either way, of course there is still many things that we could work on, but in the amount of time that we had I think that we did exceptional. Alright, now for the critique. First the good news, a lot of people liked our interview composition (Rule of thirds) and the b-roll looking good so far. Now the news in the middle, too much light on the second interview alright I understand we should have improved that. “Maybe you should have shown really big price tags when your interview was talking about really big prices” we totally should have! “More interviews and longer B-roll” I agree that more interviews and B-roll would be a fantastic improvement but we were sorta cut for time, first time we filmed took over, two, hours! While its definitely not professional it was quite hard to do and we did it, so this is Micah logging off. Hello ladies and people on computers! So at GT we are working for HIKI NO news! (Bet you twenty bucks you haven't heard of it.) so we are doing a report on sports authority a sporting goods and goodies store and even getting to interview very important members of sports authority so far this has been a amazing new experience for me (Except for the truck load of stress) and when the camera isn't rolling... ...Nothing much actually we mainly just editing it and making it look good but still i got to appreciate my teammates for doing so much stuff they are awesome though there isn't much more i can do as of now i feel like i can support them emotionally you know "you are doing great!" "amazing job!" that sorta thing but its been going good. The way I help them though is by offering help trying to help (Even though they decline!). Sadly it feels like there is always one problem that stops me from helpings my best buds and it makes me feel like i'm being as useful as a brick (Without the usefulness of a brick) and i just wish. Just wish! I could help my buds but... ...My teammates are awesome and so are you. *Trumpet* Micah man away! News story check it! Thats it. DONE! (Or i am i?!?!, I'm not) This story tells that India is the first in Asia to launch a obiter to orbit mars (Good job surprised Asia didn't do that sooner with their mechs and stuff) and that is a fantastic accomplishment for them The reason behind i chose this to tell you all is because they sent a orbiter to orbit gosh darn mars! Thats awesome in my book, but it is also nice to talk about achievements and how this is one mighty achievement The reason you should care (If you don't already) is because... This is a massive accomplishment! Think of the last time you won a trophy now compare it to this unless you just won an Emmy it makes your trophy seem small compared to it right? I don't want to dis your trophy but this is just such a humongous achievement its just so amazing just think how much that took! (Quick question from me what was your favorite invention? Leave it in a comment) This is Micah reaching mach 5, peace out! It's tough creating a news story about Sports authority on the spot my team and me know that well but the most interesting thing so far is getting to look around Sports authority like news reporters. The lack of communication is what made this project so stressful because we could not figure out a time to work or get information from our members it felt like we had a phone that didn't work. The most important part of this is making sure the camera doesn't move and keeps it place, we basically need to make sure the camera is always in one position because if it isn't then we can't even use the footage in our news report mistakes aren't an option. This is Micah running away! Oh yes i am a crazed mad man posting somthing not gt related on my weebly but! I plan to have some other stuff and things! Like... maybe this? Maybe sharing some pictures to you guys might be nice. But this is completly optional if mr sandrel (Gt teacher) doesnt like this i can just go delete this, this is sorta just a message to my "Viewers" asking if i should have a seprate page for my pictures i make, all up to you guys. Micah blasting off again! If you have seen Frankenstein's monster. You didn't see anything yet! Welcome to photoshop the experiment muhahahaha! (Aka WHAT HAVE I DONE!)
But all jokes aside i had fun with this and i think thats what matters the most. I didnt like how the brown cat turned out, But the white.. SO CUTE!
I guess thats all i have to say... ...This is Micah signing off. So guess what... Its back to school! A while ago... So yeah i hope every one is having a fantastic time! So far it seems like GT is the hardest class (Which is funny because this is what its for) and art (Undoubtedly) is the best, so far school is rolling good... My favorite moment so far would be when school ends-Joking! But it would be when we got to draw the cover page of my sketch book and art. I hope to work for NASA someday so thats what is keeping me sane with all this work. Wish me luck!
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