Hope you enjoyed that... Wait you didn't? Awww man!
Well shucks so this is our team's (Team 5 best team) "finished" news story by finished I mean rushed but enough about that this news story is about the new(-ish) Sports Authority (Woo! Break out the wine! Who cares.) This is good for Kauai because we don't have those shops that sell sports wear so this is a pretty needed improvement. This news story pretty much just advertises the new Sports Authority. The fabulous-tastic people who made this are known by Linden Johns, Kamalei Berg,and Kalani Young And dont forget... meeee... *gasp* eeeeeeee... Yeah so this is the finished news story not the best but I feel its not the... No wait it is. I think that our news story is pretty good just not A+ grade. Its not worthy of an A+ because we didn't have enough b-roll and most of the shots we had had faults (Blurry, shaky, etc). The experience however was amazing and awesomely epic like interviewing a member of Sports Authority was really really cool. Overall, I sorta like it either way, of course there is still many things that we could work on, but in the amount of time that we had I think that we did exceptional. Alright, now for the critique. First the good news, a lot of people liked our interview composition (Rule of thirds) and the b-roll looking good so far. Now the news in the middle, too much light on the second interview alright I understand we should have improved that. “Maybe you should have shown really big price tags when your interview was talking about really big prices” we totally should have! “More interviews and longer B-roll” I agree that more interviews and B-roll would be a fantastic improvement but we were sorta cut for time, first time we filmed took over, two, hours! While its definitely not professional it was quite hard to do and we did it, so this is Micah logging off.
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Makaio Gonsalves
11/17/2014 07:45:23 am
Cool VO
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Kyla Bautista
11/17/2014 07:46:05 am
1. Nice writing piece
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Tim Blum
11/17/2014 07:46:35 am
You spoke really loud and clear
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