My poem is about the rights and honor of being a knight like defending the people who can't defend themselves. While i pretty much only used drawings for the visuals it was sorta (“Sorta”) rushed, mainly procrastination and some of it being, laziness… But I digress, this is about my visual poem. Not my laziness of making it, is it?
While my visual poem is barren of special effects I feel that the uniqueness and great writing makes up for the lack of effects. I used special colored text to try and give a, Magically burnt into feel so to speak. Also I used drawings to make up the B-roll, Because where am i going to find a knight wearing armor in hawaii! (Just ask sir Surfsalot). Even though how lackluster the effects were I am more then happy how it came out. I feel the the writing was write-on (Badam tis!) and if I had more time and actualy wanted to work on it at home I feel like this could have turned out fantastic. The ways I would improve it would be adding effects, Maybe I could get some natural b-roll, And probably add some transition effects. Other then that I feel like this is one of my best poems, (I have a haiku which is my best but thats a story for another post). Micah out and about
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ala
11/17/2014 07:44:10 am
I love how you read the poem
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Ashley Alfiler
11/17/2014 07:44:11 am
Good job using lyrics based on your Poem.
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Denae Sacramed
11/17/2014 07:44:44 am
I like how drawings were used
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Hershel Weiner
11/17/2014 07:44:54 am
I like how the text is just like a book
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Linden
11/17/2014 07:45:04 am
I really liked the meaningful words.
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Jhoanna Domingo
11/17/2014 07:45:10 am
I like you drawings
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Kynan
11/17/2014 07:45:17 am
I like your B-roll of the papers
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11/17/2014 07:45:23 am
Your audio was clear and I could understand what you said
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Julie
11/17/2014 07:45:30 am
It was really well written
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11/17/2014 07:45:35 am
I loved how much soul you put into you words!
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Ahley Ricciardi
11/17/2014 07:45:50 am
I really like your voice overs
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Raiden Kurisu
11/17/2014 07:46:16 am
I like the expression in your voice.
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Lani
11/17/2014 07:46:22 am
I loved the way you recited your poem! You have so much expression and emotion when you said it
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Meleana Keawe
11/17/2014 07:46:30 am
I liked the many text layovers
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11/17/2014 07:46:50 am
Nice way of saying the voice overs
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Talia washington
11/17/2014 07:47:00 am
I really liked you voice over it added character sort of
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Maddie Hoesel
11/17/2014 07:47:14 am
You told a great story!
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Kasiah Vercelli
11/17/2014 07:47:35 am
Amazing voice overs, you had lots of expression!
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kalani
11/17/2014 07:48:14 am
great expressions
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